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雅思写作较常见的错误总结
1.不一致(disagreements)
所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致,它还包括了数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致等。
例1.when one have money,he can do what he want to.
(人一旦有了钱,他就能想干什么就干什么。)
剖析:one是单数第三人称,因而本句的have应改为has;同理,want应改为wants.本句是典型的主谓不一致。
改为:once one has money,he can do what he wants(to do)2.修饰语错位(misplaced modifiers)
英语与汉语不同,同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置,句子的含义可能引起变化。对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视,因而造成了不必要的误解。
例1.i believe i can do it well and i will better know the world outside the campus.
剖析:better位置不当,应置于句末。
3.句子不完整(sentence fragments)
在口语中,交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等,不完整的句子完全可以被理解.可是书面语就不同了,句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清,这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后,笔者又想加些补充说明时发生。
例1.there are many ways to know the society.for example by tv,radio,newspaper and so on.
剖析:本句后半部分"for example by tv,radio,newspaper and so on.”不是一个完整的句子,仅为一些不连贯的词语,不能独立成句。
改为:there are many ways to know society,for example,by tv,radio,and newspaper.
4.悬垂修饰语(dangling modifiers)
所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清。
例如:at the age of ten,my grandfather died.这句中"at the age of ten"只点出十岁时,但没有说明”谁”十岁时.按一般推理不可能是my grandfather,如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点,全句就不那么费解了。
改为:
when i was ten,my grandfather died.
例1.to do well in college,good grades are essential.
剖析:句中不定式短语“to do well in college”的逻辑主语不清楚.
改为:
to do well in college,a student needs good grades.
5.词性误用(misuse of parts of speech)
“词性误用”常表现为:介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等。
例1.none can negative the importance of money.
剖析:negative系形容词,误作动词。
改为:
none can deny the importance of money.
6.指代不清(ambiguous reference of pronouns)指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清,或者先后所用的代词不一致。试看下面这一句:
mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.
(玛丽和我姐姐很要好,因为她要她做她的伴娘。)读完上面这一句话,读者无法明确地判断两位姑娘中谁将结婚,谁将当伴娘。如果我们把易于引起误解的代词的所指对象加以明确,意思就一目了然了。这个句子可改为:
mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
例1.and we can also know the society by serving it yourself.
剖析:句中人称代词we和反身代词yourself指代不一致。改为:
we can also know society by serving it ourselves.
7.不间断句子(run-on sentences)
什么叫run-on sentence?请看下面的例句。
例1.there are many ways we get to know the outside world.
剖析:这个句子包含了两层完整的意思:“there are many ways.”以及“we get to know the outside world.”。简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。
改为:
there are many ways for us to learn about the outside world.或:
there are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world.
8.措词毛病(troubles in diction)
diction是指在特定的句子中怎样适当地选用词语的问题,囿于教学时间紧迫,教师平时在这方面花的时间往往极其有限,影响了学生在写作中没有养成良好的推敲,斟酌的习惯。他们往往随心所欲,拿来就用。所以作文中用词不当的错误比比皆